Your CV Heat Map
Every section scored 1–10 — profile, project experience, systems and equipment coverage, achievements, ATS readiness, and format. You’ll see where recruiters stop reading.
CV Diagnostic
Find out exactly why your CV isn't getting callbacks.
A scored diagnostic of your commissioning CV — reviewed personally by a Lead E&I/ICSS Commissioning Engineer with 30+ years on FPSO, LNG and petrochemical projects. Not software. Not a template checklist.
£29 — fully credited against any CV service booked within 14 days.
Delivery
Delivered within 48 hours as a PDF report.
This is a diagnosis, not a repair: the report names what’s wrong and why it matters, then points you to the right service to fix it.
What you get
A diagnostic you can act on, not generic advice.
Your Three Critical Failures
The three issues costing you the most interviews — named and explained. Why they fail with EPC recruiters, agency screeners, and ATS filters, from someone who has sat on the hiring side.
Your Verdict & Fix Path
A straight answer: is your CV a rewrite, a restructure, or a tune-up? And exactly which service fixes it — no upselling beyond what the document actually needs.
Important
This is a diagnosis, not a repair.
The diagnostic tells you what’s wrong and why it matters — the rewriting, restructuring and keyword engineering is what the CV services deliver. If you book any service within 14 days, your £29 comes straight off the price.
Why it isn’t free
£29 is a filter and a down payment.
We used to review CVs for free. What we found: a free review is treated like free advice — read once, filed away, nothing changes, and the CV keeps getting rejected. A £29 diagnostic gets read properly, acted on, and credited back when you’re ready to fix the problems. It costs you nothing if you proceed — and less than one day of a commissioning day rate if you don’t.
Trust
Engineer to engineer, with the hiring-side verdict.
- Reviewed by a MIET Lead Commissioning Engineer — not a generic CV writer
- PARWCC member
- Specialists in commissioning & completions: E&I, ICSS, mechanical, process, data centre
- 48-hour turnaround
Composite Example
See a composite before-and-after example before you buy.
This composite example shows the same career before and after restructuring, quantification, and keyword control. The aim is not to invent achievements, but to show how a hiring-side rewrite turns vague experience into a document that reads as credible and searchable.
Composite example for illustration only. Not an actual client CV.
Names, roles, and project references are used only to demonstrate structure, framing, and scoring logic.
Heat Map Comparison
The same scoring system the diagnostic uses.
Before
Profile3/10
Project experience2/10
Systems & equipment coverage3/10
Achievements2/10
ATS readiness2/10
Format5/10
After
Profile9/10
Project experience9/10
Systems & equipment coverage8/10
Achievements8/10
ATS readiness9/10
Format8/10
Before
DANIEL OKONKWO
Engineer | Nigeria | A typical version that has real experience, but not enough signal.
Objective
Hardworking and dedicated engineer with many years of experience in the oil and gas industry looking for a new challenging role where I can use my skills and grow professionally within a reputable organization.
Experience
Senior Field Engineer — Saipem, Nigeria (2021 – Present) Responsible for various commissioning activities on FPSO project. Worked closely with other departments to make sure things were completed on time. Helped with troubleshooting of electrical systems and instrumentation issues when they came up. Commissioning Engineer — Technip, Angola (2018 – 2021) Involved in commissioning of topside modules for LNG facility. Duties included checking cables, loop testing, and assisting with punch list close out. Also did some work on the DCS system. Instrumentation Engineer — Bilfinger, Qatar (2015 – 2018) Worked on instrumentation activities for petrochemical plant including calibration and testing of field devices. Part of a team responsible for pre-commissioning checks.
Education / Other Info
BEng Electrical Engineering, University of Lagos — 2008 Have various certificates from training courses over the years including safety courses and some technical ones. Willing to relocate. References available on request.
After
DANIEL OKONKWO
Lead E&I Commissioning Engineer | FPSO, LNG & Petrochemical | The same career, reframed so a hiring lead can read the level quickly.
Profile
Electrical & Instrumentation Commissioning Engineer with 15 years' experience across FPSO, LNG, and petrochemical projects in Nigeria, Angola, Qatar, and Malaysia. Track record leading loop testing, DCS/ESD/F&G energisation, and punch-list close-out on capital projects exceeding $2bn TIC.
Core Competencies
DCS/ESD/F&G Commissioning · Loop & Function Testing · Energisation & Live Testing · Punch List Management (A/B/C) · HAZOP/SIL Close-Out · Vendor & Client Liaison · ATEX/Hazardous Area Compliance · Team Supervision
Experience
Senior Field Engineer — Saipem — FPSO Project, Nigeria (2021 – Present) Lead E&I commissioning execution across topsides modules on a $2.3bn FPSO conversion project, coordinating directly with Process, Mechanical, and ICSS discipline leads. Supervised a team of 8 field engineers and technicians, reporting daily progress to the Commissioning Manager and client representatives. Commissioning Engineer — Technip — LNG Topsides, Angola (2018 – 2021) Delivered commissioning of DCS-controlled topside modules covering 400+ instrument loops and closed out 200+ punch items across A/B/C categories. Electrical Engineer (promoted from Technician) — McDermott — Offshore Platform, Malaysia (2012 – 2015) Promoted within 18 months and progressed from cable and continuity work into loop checks and energisation support on a major offshore installation project.
Education & Qualifications
BEng (Hons) Electrical Engineering — University of Lagos, 2008 IOSH Managing Safely ATEX/Hazardous Area Awareness (Ex Certification) NEBOSH International General Certificate
What the diagnostic is catching
- Passive phrases such as “helped with”, “involved in”, and “did some work” are replaced with ownership, scale, and outcome.
- Systems, equipment, certifications, and searchable keywords are surfaced instead of buried in vague paragraphs.
- The rewrite does not invent achievements. It restructures, quantifies, and positions what is already true.
Trust & FAQ
The key questions, answered before you buy.
What to expect
- Delivered within 48 hours as a PDF diagnostic report.
- Names what is wrong, why it matters, and what service actually fixes it.
- The diagnostic is fully credited against a qualifying follow-on service within 14 days.
Frequently asked
Does the diagnostic rewrite my CV?
No. The diagnostic identifies the issues and the fix path. The actual rewriting happens inside the CV services.
Who is the diagnostic best for?
It is best for engineers and technical professionals who are not getting traction and need a clear view of what is failing first.
What if I disagree with the diagnostic verdict?
You can reply and challenge the conclusion directly. The verdict is explained against hiring-side judgment, role fit, and document evidence rather than generic CV advice.
How is confidentiality handled in the diagnostic?
Your CV, project context, and career plans are handled with project-style confidentiality and used only for the diagnostic and any follow-on service decision.
What happens if I continue to a paid service?
If you book a qualifying service within 14 days, the diagnostic fee is credited back against that work.